New Fic: Reptile
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catch22girlTitle: Reptile
Author: Catch22Girl
Rating: R/NC-17
Spoilers: Up to 3x10 - Day 3 10-11 pm
Summary: She was free to show her true personality. And she wanted to play.
Disclaimer: Characters not mine, they belong to whoever owns 24. Title from NIN.
Note: Alterate season 3 scene. Continuation of Alone and an Easy Target
This one is for![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
queen_kiwi.
This has been with me for a few weeks now. I know more happened than just kissing between them. This is an alternate version of the end/beginning of 3x10/3x11.
what if she touches with those fingertips.
as the words spill out like fire from her lips.
-"Sanctified" by NIN
Jack looked tired and so different from the man that Nina lusted after that for a few minutes he had no effect on her at all.
Then, she got him handcuffed to the chair and felt more than knew the moment she wanted him again.
Control had always been one of her kinks. But when someone feared her? That made her insides melt as her exterior just got tougher.
It was one of the downsides of being a good guy, you could never really insite that kind of fear. For years she pretended to be the submissive one. Now, she was free to show her true personality. And she wanted to play.
"You used to like it when I touched you," Nina said, kneeling in front of Jack, unable to keep from smiling, letting him for the first time really see what she was thinking. Her smile widened as he reflexively tried to move away.
"Remember those moments at my old apartment?" She was undoing his pants as she talked, watching him pretend to be impervious to her advances.
He was challenging her with his eyes, daring her to go further.
"I know you like to pretend that we were never anything other than co-workers. But you and I both know what happened between us."
Her hands slid up his chest.as she leaned forward and kissed the side of his neck, feeling his rapid pulse against her lips. She slipped her hands into his pants, rubbing gently.
"Remember that time in my shower when I made you come so hard you slammed your head against the wall and almost gave yourself a concussion?" She whispered against his skin, feeling him half-harden under her hand as she spoke.
"You still want me, Jack" she breathed into his ear and pulled away to look at him. His eyes were tightly shut, his hands fisted in their restraints, his expression almost blank. She watched him clinically. "Admit it and maybe I'll help you."
He opened his eyes, his fingers loosened and he looked at her. As she leaned in again, he kissed her first and she wrapped her arm around his neck and pulled herself in closer.
She kept stroking him, feeling him harden as she kissed him, and prepared to destroy him.
"I was standing behind her when I shot her," She whispered roughly and felt his entire body tense up under her hands.
"She didn't make a sound. Didn't pray for the life of her unborn child. She didn't even cry out for help," She continued, stroking faster, touching him in ways that his body was powerless to resist.
"Teri was crying because she knew that she was about to die and that you weren't there to save her," she twisted the knife, smiling against his neck as she heard his labored breathing and saw his fists clench and unclench.
"How do you think she'd feel if she knew that you were about to come from the very hand that pulled the trigger?" She sucked on his earlobe and kissed her way back to his mouth. His eyes were closed again, pain evident on his features but as her lips met his, he kissed back.
She knew he was close and her own heart was racing, causing him this kind of emotional anguish after everything he'd done to her was making it difficult to think and if she trusted him more she'd release one of his hands and...no. This wasn't about sex. This was about revenge.
"As I shot her she whispered your name," A lie, but one he could never prove. "She bled to death while you were trying to kill me. You probably could have saved her. Oh, she'd be paralyzed, but alive. So, really, it's all your fault." She tongued him as she stroked him beyond the point of control.
Warmth spread through her body as she felt him spasm into her hand. She smiled up at his crushed expression and wiped her hand on his pants.
She kissed him again and he actually kissed back, which was more than she was expecting. He was desperate. She had total control of him.
Nina pulled away and calmly told him, "I'm sorry, Jack, but I don't believe you."
Author: Catch22Girl
Rating: R/NC-17
Spoilers: Up to 3x10 - Day 3 10-11 pm
Summary: She was free to show her true personality. And she wanted to play.
Disclaimer: Characters not mine, they belong to whoever owns 24. Title from NIN.
Note: Alterate season 3 scene. Continuation of Alone and an Easy Target
This one is for
queen_kiwi.This has been with me for a few weeks now. I know more happened than just kissing between them. This is an alternate version of the end/beginning of 3x10/3x11.
what if she touches with those fingertips.
as the words spill out like fire from her lips.
-"Sanctified" by NIN
Jack looked tired and so different from the man that Nina lusted after that for a few minutes he had no effect on her at all.
Then, she got him handcuffed to the chair and felt more than knew the moment she wanted him again.
Control had always been one of her kinks. But when someone feared her? That made her insides melt as her exterior just got tougher.
It was one of the downsides of being a good guy, you could never really insite that kind of fear. For years she pretended to be the submissive one. Now, she was free to show her true personality. And she wanted to play.
"You used to like it when I touched you," Nina said, kneeling in front of Jack, unable to keep from smiling, letting him for the first time really see what she was thinking. Her smile widened as he reflexively tried to move away.
"Remember those moments at my old apartment?" She was undoing his pants as she talked, watching him pretend to be impervious to her advances.
He was challenging her with his eyes, daring her to go further.
"I know you like to pretend that we were never anything other than co-workers. But you and I both know what happened between us."
Her hands slid up his chest.as she leaned forward and kissed the side of his neck, feeling his rapid pulse against her lips. She slipped her hands into his pants, rubbing gently.
"Remember that time in my shower when I made you come so hard you slammed your head against the wall and almost gave yourself a concussion?" She whispered against his skin, feeling him half-harden under her hand as she spoke.
"You still want me, Jack" she breathed into his ear and pulled away to look at him. His eyes were tightly shut, his hands fisted in their restraints, his expression almost blank. She watched him clinically. "Admit it and maybe I'll help you."
He opened his eyes, his fingers loosened and he looked at her. As she leaned in again, he kissed her first and she wrapped her arm around his neck and pulled herself in closer.
She kept stroking him, feeling him harden as she kissed him, and prepared to destroy him.
"I was standing behind her when I shot her," She whispered roughly and felt his entire body tense up under her hands.
"She didn't make a sound. Didn't pray for the life of her unborn child. She didn't even cry out for help," She continued, stroking faster, touching him in ways that his body was powerless to resist.
"Teri was crying because she knew that she was about to die and that you weren't there to save her," she twisted the knife, smiling against his neck as she heard his labored breathing and saw his fists clench and unclench.
"How do you think she'd feel if she knew that you were about to come from the very hand that pulled the trigger?" She sucked on his earlobe and kissed her way back to his mouth. His eyes were closed again, pain evident on his features but as her lips met his, he kissed back.
She knew he was close and her own heart was racing, causing him this kind of emotional anguish after everything he'd done to her was making it difficult to think and if she trusted him more she'd release one of his hands and...no. This wasn't about sex. This was about revenge.
"As I shot her she whispered your name," A lie, but one he could never prove. "She bled to death while you were trying to kill me. You probably could have saved her. Oh, she'd be paralyzed, but alive. So, really, it's all your fault." She tongued him as she stroked him beyond the point of control.
Warmth spread through her body as she felt him spasm into her hand. She smiled up at his crushed expression and wiped her hand on his pants.
She kissed him again and he actually kissed back, which was more than she was expecting. He was desperate. She had total control of him.
Nina pulled away and calmly told him, "I'm sorry, Jack, but I don't believe you."
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Date: 2004-02-28 03:26 pm (UTC)*verklempts*
Ohmygod, I think I just died. I love you. That was beyond brilliant.
I'm convinced too that they didnt just kiss during that exchange. The Nina you've written was so deliciously sadistic and evil.. and just.. so Nina. Gah. I need to go pick up pieces of my brain now.
"Remember that time in my shower when I made you come so hard you slammed your head against the wall and almost gave yourself a concussion?"
*dies* What I would give to read a fic involving that!
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Date: 2004-02-28 03:35 pm (UTC)But thank you and yeah, she's evil in my head. I can't help it. She used to be just misunderstood. But now? Misunderstood with an evil streak.
I'm glad you liked it. But I'm not writing that fic. That line was my friend's favorite too.
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Date: 2004-02-28 03:47 pm (UTC)Misunderstood with an evil streak? Hah, sounds just like Nina.
But I'm not writing that fic
Aw, damn.. well, I can wish, right? Now, I'll just have that image embedded in my brain for the rest of the night.. *sigh*
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Date: 2004-02-28 05:29 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-02-28 05:30 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-02-28 08:11 pm (UTC)*hugs*
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Date: 2004-02-29 03:45 am (UTC)Thanks so much for writing it. :D You won't write about the bathroom thing? Too bad. But thanks for giving me more things to think about. That's almost as good as writing the story. :o)~
What I would like to read even more -- the above story in Jack POV. But that's too much to ask, I know. ;)
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Date: 2004-02-29 10:07 am (UTC)*sigh* I've re-read this story at least 5 times and it hasnt lost its beauty..
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Date: 2004-02-29 10:12 am (UTC)I don't really write happy smut or like, non complicated smut. But anyone else is free to take up the torch and write that story.
I'd LOVE to see that story from Jack's POV, but I could never write it. However, anyone else is absolutely free to try.
No problem :)
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Date: 2004-02-29 10:30 am (UTC)You know, it involves Nina. If it is written in Nina POV it won't be happy smut. I must say that I would love stories about the time when Nina and Jack were together. From her POV. Don't tell me that relationship was true and simple to her. I can't believe that. ;)
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Date: 2004-02-29 10:34 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-02-29 10:40 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-02-29 02:15 pm (UTC)Yeah, it seems like she'll sleep with anyone if it furthers her goals. Although, without knowing the actual story of Alvers? Can't really say.
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Date: 2004-02-29 08:51 pm (UTC)Word. Word. Double, triple WORD!
That's how I always felt with Nina.. there was no doubt that the affair meant something to her because it could very well be possible that Jack was one of the few men who cared for her.
Dammit, this is why I love them so!
WOW!!
Date: 2004-09-11 04:17 pm (UTC)This scene is the so tense and at the same time so exciting.
Nina's words are so hard and painful... but her "manipulation" is not less hard for Jack. ;) lol
Excellent work.